I’ve read the same wording about tears in too many books.
Tears stream and streak, glint and glisten, flee and flow, prickle and trickle.
They slip, slide, run, roll, seemingly unstoppable.
Tears blur vision, soak hair, get wiped, get blinked. But some tears are unshed, unspent, unspilled, or unspecified.
Sobs can choke and rack and wrench. Characters sob on shoulders and in showers, often uncontrollably.
I could go on about crying and bawling and weeping and wailing. But I won’t.
You all get it.
Let’s dive in and play in words.
Five Tips for Writing Tears that Carry Power
1. Write Fresh.
Write sentences about tears and crying that we’ve never read before.
2. Nix Some Tears.
Give your characters some different reaction.
In real life, eyes fill to the brim with tears more often than we want to see on the page. And a single tear may slide down someone’s cheek.
But you’re in charge of your characters. You don’t have to stick with what pops on the page in your first draft.
Nix some of the crying and tears in an early draft—and give your characters a different reaction. Could be dialogue, an action, body language, a facial expression, a dialogue cue, a visceral response, or a powerful thought. And give it some fresh elements.
You can make the reaction fit your character, and not be predictable. You’ll keep the reader immersed in your story, locked on each page